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Re: Minuura's Mission (January 1st)

Posted: January 19th, 2016, 7:54 pm
by MichelleCYoung
So, I missed Chapter 2, and when I saw Chapter 3, I binge-read.

Wow.
Spoiler:
Lots of funny stuff, and then...

Chapter 3 - the carnage! Oh, my plumber, the carnage!

Those poor kids.

And yet, you kept them. No kid-deaths, and no Social Services. I am appalled and amazed, at the same time.

Actually, I think i like this ending you wrote better than if you had won.

HAHAHAH! That picture of Olaf right under Nargil does look kind of painful, doesn't it?

Re: Minuura's Mission (January 1st)

Posted: January 20th, 2016, 2:26 pm
by Radiochocolate
Spoiler:
Well, now we know that
not restocking the fridge -> starving -> deaths -> ghosts
therefore
ghosts + not restocking the fridge -> more ghosts
which can also be explained as
Mia + uncontrollables -> graveyards getting built

I too was amazed at the Social Worker not showing up. Then again, I kind of focused more on keeping them alive than the patients.

Death and destruction does seem to work in one's favor when it comes to creative writing :P But really, I am proud of myself for writing up such a dramatic ending. Makes me want to start some challenges with more plot in them...

The picture combo was a happy accident :lol: