So, I missed Chapter 2, and when I saw Chapter 3, I binge-read.
Wow.
Spoiler:
Lots of funny stuff, and then...
Chapter 3 - the carnage! Oh, my plumber, the carnage!
Those poor kids.
And yet, you kept them. No kid-deaths, and no Social Services. I am appalled and amazed, at the same time.
Actually, I think i like this ending you wrote better than if you had won.
HAHAHAH! That picture of Olaf right under Nargil does look kind of painful, doesn't it?
Re: Minuura's Mission (January 1st)
Posted: January 20th, 2016, 2:26 pm
by Radiochocolate
Spoiler:
Well, now we know that
not restocking the fridge -> starving -> deaths -> ghosts
therefore
ghosts + not restocking the fridge -> more ghosts
which can also be explained as
Mia + uncontrollables -> graveyards getting built
I too was amazed at the Social Worker not showing up. Then again, I kind of focused more on keeping them alive than the patients.
Death and destruction does seem to work in one's favor when it comes to creative writing But really, I am proud of myself for writing up such a dramatic ending. Makes me want to start some challenges with more plot in them...