Super Atomic Wonder Child Go!

[poopsie_doodle]

Hey y'all, here's my first stab at a Sims story. It's lots of fun so far, a great writing exercise! Hope you enjoy.

Super Atomic Wonder Child Go! The Prelude

[Teresa]

That was so cute - love the way you are starting out.

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Can't wait to see an actual child next time.

[MichelleCYoung]

I am loving these two characters!

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Uriah, with his snark. Maggie actually doing a "for exposure" on the gnomes! The COW. The cowplant stories. The neighbor. The GNOMES! Just loving all of it so much!

Sorry, I can't give a play-by-play comment right now. I have to remember to rescue the laundry from the machine of brokenness, but hey! This is going great, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Please save frequently, so you don't have to start over again. Every thirty seconds should do it.

Also, I can't wait to read your apocalypse. I checked the rules for a Sims 4 apocalypse, and he even suggests doing something like this, so awesome!

[poopsie_doodle]

Whee, thanks for reading!

[Rawla]

The first paragraph alone had me laughing out loud 3 times. And exclaiming 'oh my word'. Not joking. I'm still smiling. Going to go back and read the rest. I just had to come on and tell you. Mega awesomeness in your writing. Keep going!

Edit to add: Awesome story so far!

[MichelleCYoung]

Rawla - yeah, I laughed a lot at this one. Too many times to do a play-by-play comment, but yeah. I laughed a LOT.

And I really look forward to the apocalypse with this one! It'll be hilarious!