Hello everyone, I'm doing a Random Legacy Challenge and wanted to share it here.
Prior to this story I had posted some challenges at Carl's but never did it very seriously, they were lighthearted and an explanation of what was happening in the games. This story was born with the intention of practicing and expanding my English and over time it evolved. The first chapters are a little more basics than the last ones because I think I'm improving with time, but I let you be the judge of that.
I'm finally all caught up! Belatedly, but glad I managed it! It's a fantastic read! I can't wait to see where you go with it!
Re: Russell Random Legacy. Update Nov-11
Posted: December 3rd, 2018, 1:02 am
by Rex
Just read it all:
Spoiler:
First of all, Devin drinking all the mixed drinks? Relatable
Bellandra's tantrum face in the bunny suit reminds me so much of my cousin's kid. Adorable!
Devin finding someone else made me sad. I'm glad that he's wanting to be involved in his children's lives
Re: Russell Random Legacy. Update Nov-11
Posted: December 16th, 2018, 4:22 pm
by Nevermore
I just read this all tonight. Wow! This is so well written. Your english is amazing. In some parts, even better than mine and english is my first language.
I'm addicted to this story.
Re: Russell Random Legacy. Update Nov-11
Posted: December 16th, 2018, 11:29 pm
by simsterlyrock
I'm all caught up! I'm loving this and can't wait for more.
Spoiler:
Hopefully Bell will want to meet her dad at some point! I hope she doesn't take her anger at her mom out on her dad forever.
Re: Russell Random Legacy. Update Nov-11
Posted: December 29th, 2018, 10:11 pm
by CeresIn
I didn't realized I had comments
Thank you all for your nice words, I am already working on the next chapter, but this story is written slowly because I try to develop my English as well as possible.
Re: Russell Random Legacy. Update Nov-11
Posted: December 30th, 2018, 1:39 am
by Livvielove
Don't stress it, take your time and enjoy it! Your English has been great, but I imagine it's not easy to just "whip up a chapter" when it's not your first language! Keep up the great work! We'll be here whenever you release the next chapter!