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Re: Edhen Dath - Reboot - Discontinued (3/29/18) *Graveyard*

Postby Mpart » December 30th, 2016, 10:45 pm

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The woman held out her hand for him to shake as the blond giggled profusely. Jasper stepped forward and weighed his options carefully. Go back to hating the gods bitterly with no purpose or hate the gods with a purpose? Purpose it was. He carefully clasped her hand and shook it. The woman smiled as she gripped his hand tighter, her other hand coming up to clasp his hand and Jasper could feel something strange happening. Her eyes flashed to a glowing golden color and the world faded to black.

The story is just beginning but as always - you should never trust the beginning. Especially not this one.




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Re: Edhen Dath (4/22/17)

Postby Mpart » December 30th, 2016, 10:57 pm

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Re: Edhen Dath ( 12/30/16)

Postby Mpart » December 30th, 2016, 11:02 pm

Prologue
Image“Never trust the beginning of a shitty story.”
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Re: Edhen Dath (1/3/17)

Postby Mpart » January 3rd, 2017, 1:00 am

Chapter 1.1 - Never Trust the Beginning
Image“ Ah, yes he was the average citizen of Dragon Valley who enjoyed the occasional explosion or two."
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Re: Edhen Dath (1/14/17)

Postby Mpart » January 14th, 2017, 3:09 am

Chapter 1.2 - Brace Yourself
ImageCluck, cluck, Chicken Boy ."
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Re: Edhen Dath (1/22/17)

Postby Mpart » January 22nd, 2017, 9:48 pm

Chapter 1.3 - It All Started With a Chicken
Image"Question for you - how much do you know about..." He stopped and debated how to word it, "our... little group?"
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Re: Edhen Dath (1/22/17)

Postby Thaitanic » February 19th, 2017, 2:10 pm

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I've read the prologue and 1.1 so far and I'm a big fan!! I love the plotlines you've got brewing and I *love* your concept of Dragon Valley as a magically torn town keeping stifling order. It's super interesting!!! I'll read the rest soon. :#1:
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Re: Edhen Dath (1/22/17)

Postby Mpart » February 24th, 2017, 9:56 pm

Thaitanic wrote:
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I've read the prologue and 1.1 so far and I'm a big fan!! I love the plotlines you've got brewing and I *love* your concept of Dragon Valley as a magically torn town keeping stifling order. It's super interesting!!! I'll read the rest soon. :#1:

Ahhhh!! I'm not sure how I didn't see your amazing comment before! Thank you SO much! This is the story I have worked my hardest on and I'm proud of it. I'm so happy you enjoy it! It's been a huge amount of fun seeing Dragon Valley from a new perspective. My collaborator (Livvielove) and I came up with the lore. This made me so happy! :)
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Re: Edhen Dath (2/24/17)

Postby Mpart » February 24th, 2017, 10:10 pm

Chapter 1.4 - Turning the Page
Image"Listen to me, Jazzy. Everything is ok. You don't ever have to do something you don't want to do. You're allowed to say no. You get to decide what you do with your life, baby. You can do anything you put your mind to, and no one else gets to have that say. Ok, baby?"
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Re: Edhen Dath (4/22/17)

Postby Mpart » April 22nd, 2017, 7:20 pm

Chapter 1.5 - A New Beginning
Image"He no longer cared because he was determined to see this finished. He had risked too much in the process and cared too much. For a moment during that explosion at the temple he had felt like somebody."
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Re: Edhen Dath (5/24/17)

Postby Mpart » May 24th, 2017, 10:00 pm

Chapter 1.6 - Jane

Image"Jasper nodded. 'Thank you and uh...have a good..afternoon?'” It was afternoon, right? It didn’t matter because Jasper Piers had a plan. He turned around and started walking towards the exit before he ran into the door."
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Re: Edhen Dath - Reboot - Prologue (12/17/17)

Postby Mpart » December 17th, 2017, 1:27 pm

Prologue

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" It was just a dream anyways."

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Hello! If this is your first time seeing my stories I'm Mpart! This is my story Edhen Dath. It's my baby. If this is not your first time, I want to apologize for the 7 month silence on this story as I started to reboot it. I promise you, most of it was put to good use. This story is back! I'll probably do an author's note about what I have been doing during my hiatus later. I hope you enjoyed the prologue and are going be on this crazy ride along with me. I'll be slowly editing this thread and my blog as I get this story going again. Huge thanks to Blams and Livvielove! :))
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Re: Re: Edhen Dath - Reboot - Chapter 1.1 (1/05/18)

Postby Mpart » January 6th, 2018, 1:28 pm

Chapter 1.1 - You're Bigger Than Your Fears

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"'By reminding myself that I am bigger than my fears. That no matter how scared I am or how poor the odds may seem, that I will never forget that I can do anything I put my mind to, and you can too, Jasper.'"
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Re: Re: Edhen Dath - The End

Postby Mpart » March 29th, 2018, 8:16 pm

I've come to the difficult decision to end this story. You can find out more about that here.
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