Second Chances [Updated 03/22/17]

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Re: Second Chances [Updated 02/24/17]

Postby orangeplumbob » February 25th, 2017, 9:09 pm

And now for the continuation of the drama that had unfolded. Chapter 13: Car Trouble is up.
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Re: Second Chances [Updated 02/25/17]

Postby Ellenyarai » February 26th, 2017, 1:20 am

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You are such a good storyteller. Here I am crying at 1 in the morning. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Second Chances [Updated 02/25/17]

Postby orangeplumbob » March 19th, 2017, 9:38 pm

Finally. I am back into swings. Anyway, this took several rewrites and the next two chapters I completely rewrote.

Chapter 14: Another Chance

And just a Spoiler that I thought might interest you all:

BEHIND THE SCENES

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While I was staging photos for the frame in Derek's room, I noticed something. Every time Grant picked up, held, or was near Derek he would scream his head off. I laughed so hard. So the bit about Grant in this chapter is from what I noticed in-game, and thought you'd all like that little behind the scenes tid-bit
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Re: Second Chances [Updated 03/19/17]

Postby orangeplumbob » March 20th, 2017, 6:33 pm

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Re: Second Chances [Updated 03/19/17]

Postby Radiochocolate » March 21st, 2017, 4:10 am

I've been sneakily reading everything up until so far and must say: your writing is spectacular. Awesomesauce. I get totally wrapped up in the story, only to find cliffhanger upon cliffhanger :swoon:
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Re: Second Chances [Updated 03/19/17]

Postby orangeplumbob » March 22nd, 2017, 2:15 am

Radiochocolate wrote:I've been sneakily reading everything up until so far and must say: your writing is spectacular. Awesomesauce. I get totally wrapped up in the story, only to find cliffhanger upon cliffhanger :swoon:

Thank you! I do love cliffhangers, so expect them often. Not always, but often to keep you wanting more.

Okay, I really I hope I did this justice. I rewrote this chapter more than any other chapter (and after reading comments from the last chapter, I rewrote some of it again). Believe me, this was the hardest chapter to write.
Chapter 16: Confronting Williams
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