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Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Graveyard

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 4:00 pm
by Mpart
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There is no exceptions for those who seek questions they should not be asking.
Zoraida with bright green eyes and white hair wakes up in an unforgiving world with no memories.
It is a world where she does not fit in the system and now has to find out how to live in an island full of criminals while only being promised ten years at most to live.
The rules are strict and the judgment harsh as Zoraida questions everything in her path; the one thing that there will be no exceptions to.
The clock is ticking and Zoraida is racing against death.
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Before Reading

Chapter List


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Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 1 - A Warm Welcoming

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 4:11 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 1 - A Warm Welcoming


"Glancing over shoulder, she lifted her middle finger at them and took off running towards the hill only to find there was two more people blocking her exit."

Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 2 - Making Friends at Last

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 4:44 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 2 - Making Friends at Last


"With a long sigh, she turned around and started walking towards the front entrance as the door creaked open and a man came out, smoking a cigarette."

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 5:32 pm
by Mpart
Livvielove wrote::bounce: I'm excited to finally see this here!
I'm glad! I wanted to post it once my blog was a bit more put together, but I'm taking my sweet time on that. :fisty:

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 3 - Shattering Light

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 5:32 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 3 - Shattering Light


"The light flicked for the last time as it shattered into pieces and the room went dark."

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 4 - Broken Memories

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 5:51 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 4, Part 1 - Broken Memories


"She had woken up in a world void of color when she had been in one bursting with color moments before."

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Chapter 4, Part 2 - Broken Memories


"Her bright green eyes in the front of his mind made him remember he wasn’t the only one taken."

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 5 - More Than Trust

Posted: October 1st, 2017, 5:54 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 5 - More Than Trust


"In an unexpected moment, the box of cigarettes was plucked out of his hand. His head snapped up in surprise.""

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: January 26th, 2018, 3:56 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 6 - Continue


" Petre answered her mid sentence with a kiss before pulling back, his eyebrows furrowed. “'Continue.'"

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: February 4th, 2018, 10:23 am
by Nevermore
OMG! This amazing!! They are finally together!!! :bounce: :hearts:

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: February 8th, 2018, 7:40 pm
by heatherfeather
Just finished reading through this story and I'm loving it. :))

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: February 28th, 2018, 12:24 pm
by MichelleCYoung
Just read all of this. It's very interesting, and your staging is cool! I don't know how you do it. I am eager to find out more about this place, and more about Zo's past, and just what the heck IS that hospital place, anyway?

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: March 3rd, 2018, 7:31 pm
by Mpart
Oh my gosh, guys! I just saw these comments and they made my day!! Thank you guys, so, so much! :bounce:
Nevermore wrote:OMG! This amazing!! They are finally together!!! :bounce: :hearts:
Eep! These two are super cute and just keep surprising me. I really am loving them together! :))
heatherfeather wrote:Just finished reading through this story and I'm loving it. :))
Awwww, thank you! I'm really happy you are enjoying it!
MichelleCYoung wrote:Just read all of this. It's very interesting, and your staging is cool! I don't know how you do it. I am eager to find out more about this place, and more about Zo's past, and just what the heck IS that hospital place, anyway?
Ahhhh! Thank you so much! I build a lot of it, but Petre's house was completely done by EA. As for the other questions...zips mouth shut

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Updated Links

Posted: April 9th, 2018, 3:22 pm
by Mpart
Hi guys! I updated all my links for Exiled to Lunar Lakes to go to my new homebase, Admiring The Ashes. Admiring The Ashes is where I'll be posting the updates for now on. Check it out here. I also made a new picture for Exiled to Lunar Lakes. :O

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: April 13th, 2018, 4:37 pm
by LylaWitness
I loved catching up on this story :)

Thank you for sharing it! I'll be sticking around to hear more about Zoraida and Petre!

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 6 - Continue

Posted: July 13th, 2018, 8:42 pm
by Mpart
LylaWitness wrote:I loved catching up on this story :)

Thank you for sharing it! I'll be sticking around to hear more about Zoraida and Petre!

Awwww, thank you so much! That means a lot to me. ^^ I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier!

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 7 - The Lie and the Liar

Posted: July 13th, 2018, 9:11 pm
by Mpart
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Chapter 7, Part 1 - The Lie and the Liar


"She was a lie and he was a liar, making them both have something in common in this deadly masquerade."

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 7 - The Lie and the Liar

Posted: July 13th, 2018, 9:23 pm
by Nevermore
Spoiler:
:O :O IT'S A SIMULATION?! That explains those weird memories she had! Oh my god! The other one is Petre isn't it? What are those :censored: s doing to them? If they're hurting Zo and Petre... I'm going to kick some scientist butt! :fisty:

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 7 - The Lie and the Liar

Posted: September 5th, 2018, 12:57 pm
by MichelleCYoung
What Nevermore said! Pretty much sums up my response, as well.

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 7 - The Lie and the Liar

Posted: September 27th, 2018, 9:52 am
by Trip
Spoiler:
Gawd it really does explain everything. The memories and glitches, and how fast Petre was able to make a move on her. :P
If you're still continuing I await with baited breath...if not then you at least had a fantastic twist ending.

Re: Exiled to Lunar Lakes - Chapter 7 - The Lie and the Liar

Posted: September 30th, 2018, 7:46 pm
by Mpart
Nevermore wrote:
Spoiler:
:O :O IT'S A SIMULATION?! That explains those weird memories she had! Oh my god! The other one is Petre isn't it? What are those :censored: s doing to them? If they're hurting Zo and Petre... I'm going to kick some scientist butt! :fisty:
:bounce:
Spoiler:
Yep! It's a simulation. That means they have seen everything. As for the other questions... :shifty: :shiftyeyes: :zip:
MichelleCYoung wrote:What Nevermore said! Pretty much sums up my response, as well.
Hehehe! Thank you for commenting!
Trip wrote:
Spoiler:
Gawd it really does explain everything. The memories and glitches, and how fast Petre was able to make a move on her. :P
If you're still continuing I await with baited breath...if not then you at least had a fantastic twist ending.
Spoiler:
Well... :shiftyeyes: :zip:
Oh absolutely! I intend on seeing this story to the end! Slowly but surely. Thank you so, so much. I appreciate your comment!