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- June 9th, 2023, 4:53 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: PRIDE 2023 ..... SIMS'S SHOWCASE
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3279
Re: PRIDE 2023 ..... SIMS'S SHOWCASE
Gobias Koffi has long been one of my favorite premades; still figuring yourself out as an adult just hits for me. Gobias Koffi is a well-meaning single Sim who just hasn't met the right women. Is this because he actually prefers the company of his male friends? https://preview.redd.it/b1hlvyck8u3b1....
- June 9th, 2023, 4:46 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: PRIDE 2023 ..... BOOLPROP'S PICKS
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2912
Re: PRIDE 2023 ..... BOOLPROP'S PICKS
"Gideon the Ninth" by Tamsyn Muir - It's lesbian necromancers in space, what's not to love? :D What really stood out to me is that the characters are just lesbians. They're not struggling to come to terms with their sexuality, and there's no stigma against them. (Both are valid kinds of st...
- June 9th, 2023, 4:21 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: SUMMER FETE 2023 .... COCONUT SHY
- Replies: 158
- Views: 22765
Re: SUMMER FETE 2023 .... COCONUT SHY
Let's take a shot! (9th)
- June 9th, 2023, 4:18 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: SUMMER FETE 2023 .... GNOME TOMBOLA
- Replies: 158
- Views: 22969
Re: SUMMER FETE 2023 .... GNOME TOMBOLA
Blip sounds fun! (9th)
- June 9th, 2023, 4:12 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: SUMMER FETE 2023 ..... PING PONG TOSS
- Replies: 157
- Views: 23486
Re: SUMMER FETE 2023 ..... PING PONG TOSS
Sure, I'll give it a shot! 
Toss (9th)

Toss (9th)
- June 9th, 2023, 4:10 pm
- Forum: Summer Fete Archive
- Topic: SUMMER FETE 2023 ..... HOOK A DUCK
- Replies: 158
- Views: 22983
Re: SUMMER FETE 2023 ..... HOOK A DUCK
duck 36 (9th)
- January 4th, 2022, 4:21 pm
- Forum: Writing Corner
- Topic: New (non-Sim) Story Officially Posted: Dungeons of Danrya
- Replies: 0
- Views: 6045
New (non-Sim) Story Officially Posted: Dungeons of Danrya
Hey there! I come to you with a thing I'm pretty proud of: Dungeons of Danrya! https://dungeonsofdanrya.files.wordpress.com/2021/12/dungeons-of-danrya-modified-aj-steamer-trunk.png?w=321 I posted a few first drafts of the early chapters in the Critiques Corner here ( An Adventure Story ), so I figur...
- October 3rd, 2021, 10:07 am
- Forum: Writing Support, Suggestions, & Resources
- Topic: Looking for Writing Buddies
- Replies: 0
- Views: 22362
Looking for Writing Buddies
Not sure if this is the best place for this, but I'm looking for a couple of writer friends to swap beta reads and critiques, and, if you're interested, be accountability buddies for NaNoWriMo this year.
I'm in the midst of writing a fantasy adventure and my nanowrimo.org name is the same as here.
I'm in the midst of writing a fantasy adventure and my nanowrimo.org name is the same as here.
- October 1st, 2021, 8:20 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: Choices...for an adventure story
- Replies: 0
- Views: 5987
Choices...for an adventure story
Hi there! I come to ask you to help me with a specific scene for my adventure story, Dungeons of Danrya. Specifically, it'll be towards the end of chapter 7. :chat: I have a scene where the main character opens a chest and looks into it. What's in it? Below are two VERY different answers to that que...
- August 12th, 2021, 2:52 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 5th chapter of an adventure story
- Replies: 0
- Views: 3811
5th chapter of an adventure story
Hello once again! I've got Chapter 5 here, for your perusal. I tried to slow the pacing down a bit (at least, to begin with), based on the intensity of the last chapter. Let me know what you think, particularly about pacing . A note, this does pick up right where Ch 4 left off. Chapter 5: (word coun...
- August 11th, 2021, 12:24 am
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5447
Re: 3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
"couldnt stop reading to go pee at 2am"-intense -> that's gonna be my new metric for intenseness. XD As far as using actually measurements go, I've waffled back and forth several times. I think I'll just figure out a measurement system and stick to it. I think it'll make things more clear ...
- August 9th, 2021, 7:47 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5447
Re: 3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
Thanks for reading! Sorry I'm just now reading your replies, but I started travelling right after posting this and just recently got back home. Intense in a good way? Or bad? Was the intensity okay? Or too much? Yeah, ch 3 picks up right where ch 2 leaves off, but ch 3's opening in purposefully haph...
- July 26th, 2021, 10:21 am
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5447
3rd (& 4th?) Chapters of an adventure story
Hi there! I'm back again with another (two?) chapters. Technically I wrote this as one thing, but it's over 6000 words, so I feel it needs to be broken up. But YOU can be the final judge of that! Let me know what you think! Particularly if you got lost anywhere while reading since this part involves...
- July 23rd, 2021, 2:15 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 2nd chapter of an adventure story
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4782
Re: 2nd chapter of an adventure story
Thanks for the kind words! KatLovesPotatoes: That's EXACTLY what I was going for, a bit of dread with a dash of fear. Nothing too extreme, but enough to get across that the Dungeons aren't nice places. And I hope you can read more, because I plan to post the next few chapters too. I feel like this f...
- July 22nd, 2021, 6:47 pm
- Forum: Writing Corner
- Topic: Writing Blog
- Replies: 0
- Views: 3610
Writing Blog
Hi! I'm Fluffy! You may have seen me lurking about. What you may not know is that I have a writing blog, Fluffy Mathematician . I'm currently trying to write everyday. Occasionally I post the tidbits that seem halfway decent. None of those tidbits have been edited, so please excuse that. Or, actuall...
- July 18th, 2021, 4:23 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: 2nd chapter of an adventure story
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4782
2nd chapter of an adventure story
Uh, hi! Here's the second chapter (pretty sure it makes sense as one chapter, but let me know what you think!) of that adventure story I was talking about earlier, Dungeons of Danrya . In this chapter we get a bit more into the "adventure" part. So, dramatic and a bit scary are what I'm go...
- July 18th, 2021, 2:44 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: Intro Chapter to an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5132
Re: Intro Chapter to an adventure story
miss_eulenauge, thanks for looking it over, and for your kind words! I'm hoping to get the 2nd chapter posted here soon if you're interested. It's...more actiony? But still less dialogue...for story reasons. 

- July 16th, 2021, 7:51 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: Intro Chapter to an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5132
Re: Intro Chapter to an adventure story
Thanks for all the responses! To be honest, I wasn't sure if this board was that active. So thank you! I'll definitely be combining these parts into one chapter now. I tried to rewrite the paragraphs describing the family, interspersed with dialogue and other tidbits. What do you all think? Rewrite:...
- July 15th, 2021, 3:54 pm
- Forum: Critiques Corner
- Topic: Intro Chapter to an adventure story
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5132
Intro Chapter to an adventure story
Okay, so I'm currently stressing myself with Camp NaNoWriMo this month, trying to get out a particularly vicious plot bunny that's been bothering me this past year. :pan: This is the first two parts (chapters?) to the thing, working title is Dungeons of Danrya . I'm accepting all constructive critiq...
- February 27th, 2020, 6:30 pm
- Forum: Sims 3 Story Graveyard
- Topic: Bottoms Up! - Teen Runaway Challenge/Legacy Aug. 11, 2019
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6457
Re: Bottoms Up! - Teen Runaway Challenge/Legacy Aug. 11, 201
Woah! This was so cool to read through! Thanks for being inspired and sharing! 
